Sunday, 20 March 2016

OBSESSION: Rough Cut and feedback

Rough Cut

So this is the rough cut of our movie opening. There is currently no sounds, editing or credit sequence in this rough cut, but all the scenes that were needed are all on this video except for a few montage shots that have not been added yet. There is a lot of white noise in this rough cut so please bear that in mind. Also, the movie title at the end is not the final edit of the title animation.




Feedback

After presenting the rough cut to the class, we got feedback. The rough cut were just the connection of shots that I drew from the storyboard to link them together and form motion picture. Mentioned above: there was no editing, sound or credit sequence, only white noise so the audience did not really understood the story but still had a rough idea on where our movie was going. The positive comment was that our camerawork, cinematography and idea were excellent, they really liked where the story is going. However, the negative comments were the little bits that were not added in yet (sound, audio of characters and credit sequence) making it look sort of a movie trailer instead of opening. Also the story was still confusing in some minor areas like the short cuts that will be the area of the credit sequence and the ending close up shot of Ching Ching's face in the darkness. But overall, it was a positive feedback and we learned from it.



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